What have you learned from your audience feedback?

After making the changes from my peer assessment we then had to hand in our second draft to be teacher assessed.

Even though they are not our target audience they found that some of the fonts were a bit cheesey of the blood dripping down so we changed it for a more scrtachy font as though it had been scratched in blood rather than a written in blood. Also we needed a band image of a whole band cropped properly and more neatly. Below is the feedback sheet we were given from the teacher.